Thursday, March 31, 2011

Rule

Right to left,
Top to base,
A rule covered.

The rule was hard,
Can’t gear up,
So reviewed.

Tried shifting,
Its firm,
Now what’s next?

“Any loop holes?”
Not so far,
Called to look at.


My query is,
To roll these rules.
Let’s think over it again.

9 comments:

  1. most of the times its better to follow rules..BTW I like your header of the blog..its beautiful.

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  2. i hear you on riles that constrict, if so then we use our voice to change them...

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  3. To follow rules or not.. humm, it certainly depends on the event or situation doesn't it?! Great poem, makes you think! ;-)

    Have a wonderful day! ~ Coreen

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  4. Thank you for visiting my blog. Seems all the fellows from your country are great writers. Rules are nice at times. However, rules are made to be broken as well.

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  5. Thanks A Lot For Your Kind Visit & Compliments.

    Beautiful Excellent Write Up.

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  6. well said,Adding my voice to LV's. Rules are meant to be broken. Learn them, master them, and... break and reshape them when needed.
    best wishes,
    m

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  7. Rules cause greed and corruption, anger and frustration. The fewer the rules the more content are people.
    Thought-provoking piece.

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  8. Simple and conveys exactly what it wants to say

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