Monday, March 14, 2011

Awake

Alarm…Alarm
“You wake up”
Its morn tip, feel the chill.

Look at the sky,
The rising sun,
Enroute the light & freshness today.

Day is so sweet,
So said by many.
Unlock your road to success.

An option to show,
A round around.
Make thy passion strong & stay.

This run will do,
A beautiful pace,
All today for the season of bright.

Perceive the light,
Then you explore,
All across this beautiful world.

Awake, Arise,
Thou art of mind.
Do this for a cause, through your last
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14 comments:

  1. MaryMarch 14, 2011 at 3:12 PM

    A beautifully written poem.

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  2. Brian MillerMarch 14, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    nice. i like the awakening to the light and beauty of the world...

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  3. arasanMarch 14, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    very impressed in ur words...
    nice one ravi ...

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  4. Betsy Banks AdamsMarch 14, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    Love your poem especially since I am one who loves to wake up and enjoy the beautiful world. Thanks!!!
    Betsy

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  5. girl daydreamingMarch 15, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    having a break and starting something new to write... your poem is beautiful inspiration!

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  6. UnknownMarch 15, 2011 at 1:35 AM

    Well written..way to go!

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  7. Muralee Mukundan , ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം March 15, 2011 at 2:06 AM

    Awake, Arise,
    Thou art of mind....

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  8. Welshcakes LimoncelloMarch 15, 2011 at 2:37 AM

    I like this. I am terrible at getting up in the morning but this poem would encourage me!

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  9. A Lady's LifeMarch 15, 2011 at 7:06 AM

    Very inspiring and positive
    Awake Awake Perceive the light
    Ublock the road to success.
    YEs!!!
    :)

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  10. AnonymousMarch 15, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    Oh.. I like this a lot, Pranavam.. mornings are not just ordinary mornings, they are also the sign of a new step, the mark of a fresh start..

    Very beautifully written here...

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  11. NankaMarch 16, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    I like the positivity in your poem!! Makes one feel very energetic!! This prodding is encouraging me to do something!! :)

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  12. Tammie LeeMarch 16, 2011 at 10:46 PM

    a lovely and inspiring morning poem

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  13. RajeshMarch 17, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    Simply beautiful.

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  14. Tripthi BattapadiMarch 17, 2011 at 7:57 PM

    Nice way of writing!

    :)

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