Tuesday, March 8, 2011

She Quit

She who has lots to speak.
An hour ago,
When I went,
Her eyes just blinked twice.
It’s like she passed-
A message in a rush.
Then she locked,
No response flowed again!

‘A couple of minutes only’
The doctor said,
To go beyond that
Seems just imposs.
Take out that mask,
Let she breath her last
Rising beep, falling beats,
Then She Quit…

I hope now she sleeps well,
Don’t know how she feels.
I am sure, she will cope,
Now my prayers is
For her soul & sleep!
Oh… My dear you sleep.

15 comments:

  1. @ A Lady's Life: Thank you for stopping and for the lovely wish!

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  2. well written ravi...
    keep up ur nice thoughts...

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  3. Thanks Arasan for your kind wishes. Please visit again!

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  4. this feels very lyrical...kind of a folksy song...i like it...

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  5. sonorous ... lyrical ... loved reading it aloud :)

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  6. Sad but also peaceful. I hope it was not someone you knew.

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  7. thats not the sleep that we want to embrace ha?
    niways...

    nice poem :)
    and hope it s only a poem

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  8. Oh that is a sad one.... One thing I do know is when my brother was so sick (cancer), he was having trouble breathing... When he did die, it was almost a blessing since he looked so peaceful then.
    Betsy

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  9. My friend's adult daughter just died in her sleep, just like your poem.

    Thanks for visiting.

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