Tuesday, March 8, 2011

She Quit

She who has lots to speak.
An hour ago,
When I went,
Her eyes just blinked twice.
It’s like she passed-
A message in a rush.
Then she locked,
No response flowed again!

‘A couple of minutes only’
The doctor said,
To go beyond that
Seems just imposs.
Take out that mask,
Let she breath her last
Rising beep, falling beats,
Then She Quit…

I hope now she sleeps well,
Don’t know how she feels.
I am sure, she will cope,
Now my prayers is
For her soul & sleep!
Oh… My dear you sleep.
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14 comments:

  1. A Lady's LifeMarch 8, 2011 at 12:38 PM

    Your poems are lovely :)

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  2. Pranavam RavikumarMarch 8, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    @ A Lady's Life: Thank you for stopping and for the lovely wish!

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  3. arasanMarch 8, 2011 at 1:18 PM

    well written ravi...
    keep up ur nice thoughts...

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  4. Pranavam RavikumarMarch 8, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    Thanks Arasan for your kind wishes. Please visit again!

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 8, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    this feels very lyrical...kind of a folksy song...i like it...

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  6. MagyarMarch 9, 2011 at 6:59 AM

    Heartful_m

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  7. Celestial DreamzMarch 9, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    sonorous ... lyrical ... loved reading it aloud :)

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  8. TaborMarch 9, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    Sad but also peaceful. I hope it was not someone you knew.

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  9. deepsMarch 10, 2011 at 7:15 AM

    thats not the sleep that we want to embrace ha?
    niways...

    nice poem :)
    and hope it s only a poem

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  10. A Daft Scots LassMarch 10, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    very nice and simple.

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  11. Betsy Banks AdamsMarch 11, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    Oh that is a sad one.... One thing I do know is when my brother was so sick (cancer), he was having trouble breathing... When he did die, it was almost a blessing since he looked so peaceful then.
    Betsy

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  12. sulekhaMarch 12, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    wat more to say?

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  13. Ann, Chen Jie Xue 陈洁雪March 14, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    My friend's adult daughter just died in her sleep, just like your poem.

    Thanks for visiting.

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  14. Velvet Over SteelMarch 23, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    Wow... very moving! ~ Coreen xoxo

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