Monday, February 28, 2011

Love

Love…The rule of life,
Showed my way always,
It’s for all time in my lovely heart
To make my way set unique apart!

It came with a rush,
No resistance anywhere,
Shaky eyes with a stolen mind,
Bouncing my thoughts, all in a shot.

When eyes count way to sleep,
Difficult to pass the flash that fast,
Day is ahead for the usual turn with the dark,
Oh! Even the thoughts made me write so prompt!

12 comments:

  1. this is anintriguing verse in its progression..love wins, but it will jack you up along the way...

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  2. HI, Thanks for coming to my blog. Come back anytime. I am enjoying your poetry... Since I have no talent in this area, I am always in awe of someone who has this talent. Thanks so much...
    Betsy

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  3. Lovely poetry!
    Thanks for dropping by my blog.
    Have a wonderful day.

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  4. true love always has its way in the most beautiful way!

    lovely writing!

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  5. Awesome writeup..keep up the good work!

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  6. I liked this literally until the last word... I think you should change 'prompt' to something else, something about it just doesn't fit with the rest.

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  7. Interesting how love set path for you! Well written Ravi :)

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  8. Wonderful written :-)
    Have a nice week-end ...

    greetings from The Netherlands

    Kareltje =^.^= ♥ Betsie >^.^<
    Anya :)

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  9. Very lovely poem & on my favorite subject too!! :-)

    Hugs,
    Coreen

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