Friday, February 18, 2011

Life

Life; a journey unforeseen!
No ways clear, not very sure.
Yet I walked, and went on.

An unexpected ride,
With unfolded thoughts,
Unnoticed all through.

It began all with hope,
But wrecked when it met fear.
He who made me fall down.

Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
But a little more to go and learn-
Art of converting will to win.

Not for fame, not to shine,
But to go on till the end.
Though unseen, uncovered!
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14 comments:

  1. zephyr ziaFebruary 18, 2011 at 2:57 PM

    I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep...

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  2. Pranavam RavikumarFebruary 18, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    @Zephyr Zia: Ofcourse yes.. Thanks for reminding Robert Frost's amazing lines.!!! Thanks for coming.. You have a nice day!

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  3. ஆனந்தி..February 18, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Wow...Great Ravi...
    //Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
    But a little more to go and learn-
    Art of converting will to win.//

    lovely lines .....

    Then, i remind u this 'quote' which i read...
    "Life is a ticket to the greatest show on earth."

    we get d ticket and show d magnificient earth where includes this poem..:)))

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  4. Brian MillerFebruary 18, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    life is a journey...to go it unnoticed is rather a tragedy...

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  5. L.L. BarkatFebruary 18, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    "though unseen, uncovered"

    a quiet picture of humility and, somehow, mystery

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  6. Sabu HariharanFebruary 19, 2011 at 12:22 AM

    I am impressed dear.

    stones you step on,
    may it lead to light.
    you may fight
    but it will be right..

    sorry I am not good at writing poems..

    Best wishes.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 19, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    nice poem

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  8. Muralee Mukundan , ബിലാത്തിപട്ടണം February 19, 2011 at 3:45 AM

    Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
    But a little more to go and learn-
    Art of converting will to win.

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  9. Welshcakes LimoncelloFebruary 19, 2011 at 6:07 AM

    This is very nice.

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  10. UnknownFebruary 19, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Nice poem..way to go!

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  11. sulekhaFebruary 19, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    filled with the energy.itz grt ravi.move on.............

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  12. LauraFebruary 23, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    such a beautiful description of this life journey. thank you for visiting me, i have been blessed by my visit here.

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  13. AnyaFebruary 24, 2011 at 3:19 PM

    You are a fantastic writer
    love your lines :-)

    Hugs from The Netherlands !!

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  14. KarinFebruary 24, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    Thank you for your visit and comment on my post. Enjoyed your poem!

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