Friday, February 18, 2011

Life

Life; a journey unforeseen!
No ways clear, not very sure.
Yet I walked, and went on.

An unexpected ride,
With unfolded thoughts,
Unnoticed all through.

It began all with hope,
But wrecked when it met fear.
He who made me fall down.

Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
But a little more to go and learn-
Art of converting will to win.

Not for fame, not to shine,
But to go on till the end.
Though unseen, uncovered!

14 comments:

  1. I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep...

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  2. @Zephyr Zia: Ofcourse yes.. Thanks for reminding Robert Frost's amazing lines.!!! Thanks for coming.. You have a nice day!

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  3. Wow...Great Ravi...
    //Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
    But a little more to go and learn-
    Art of converting will to win.//

    lovely lines .....

    Then, i remind u this 'quote' which i read...
    "Life is a ticket to the greatest show on earth."

    we get d ticket and show d magnificient earth where includes this poem..:)))

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  4. life is a journey...to go it unnoticed is rather a tragedy...

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  5. "though unseen, uncovered"

    a quiet picture of humility and, somehow, mystery

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  6. I am impressed dear.

    stones you step on,
    may it lead to light.
    you may fight
    but it will be right..

    sorry I am not good at writing poems..

    Best wishes.

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  7. Now my clock ticks “Time Up”
    But a little more to go and learn-
    Art of converting will to win.

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  8. filled with the energy.itz grt ravi.move on.............

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  9. such a beautiful description of this life journey. thank you for visiting me, i have been blessed by my visit here.

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  10. You are a fantastic writer
    love your lines :-)

    Hugs from The Netherlands !!

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  11. Thank you for your visit and comment on my post. Enjoyed your poem!

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