Monday, April 25, 2011

Verse for thee

It’s like yesterday
All that we did,
Enjoyed the days
Hundred times more I do!

We fought at times,
All for silly, stupid reasons.
After so long, I realized,
You too, over a period.

I thank Her, also Him,
Because we are in through.
I am blessed for sure,
Till I quit from you.

My eyes all set to flow,
Not for any bitter cause,
But for missing thy laugh,
Far away from you today.

You are my light,
You are my life,
Count me dear…
I live for thee!

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I dedicate this poem to my sweet brother Visakh(Kochi) and lovely cousin Manasa Narayan (Lolli)
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18 comments:

  1. Tatenda WilliamApril 25, 2011 at 7:12 PM

    i like the soft but flowing rhythm of this poem

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  2. lachuApril 26, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    Lovely..

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  3. anthonynorthApril 26, 2011 at 3:02 PM

    Lovely, heartfelt words.

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  4. AkelamaluApril 26, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    Very nice. :)

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  5. CarlettaApril 26, 2011 at 4:05 PM

    "But for missing thy laugh,
    Far away from you today" - my favorite lines. :)
    Hope you're having a wonderful week.

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  6. The PoetApril 26, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    Beautiful sentiments.

    Thanks for stopping by.

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  7. Brian MillerApril 26, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    an endearing verse...i hear commitment and longing...and thank you, i hope yours was as well...

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  8. ConnieApril 26, 2011 at 5:59 PM

    I like this! Very nice poem. :-) Thank you for your visit and comment at my blog.

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  9. LVApril 26, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    What another great poem. I am sure your brother and cousin were pleased you honored them with such kind words. I cam so pleased when you take the time from your busy life to visit and leave me a comment. So nice hearing from friends worldwide.

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  10. PhilO♥April 26, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    How sweet :)
    Simple yet it holds so much meaning!

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  11. RHYTHM AND RHYMEApril 27, 2011 at 12:18 AM

    Excellent poem, such a pleasure to read.

    Thanks for your comment.
    Yvonne.

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  12. Rek SeshApril 27, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    Endearing and sweet.

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  13. TaborApril 27, 2011 at 2:57 AM

    You are a lucky soul to have a close relationship with your relations.

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  14. Betsy Banks AdamsApril 27, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    Oh how nice.... I'm sure your brother and cousin feel very privileged to get a poem written to them --and dedicated to them.. That is AWESOME.
    Betsy

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  15. deepsApril 28, 2011 at 7:35 AM

    so beautifully versed...

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  16. RajeshApril 28, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    Very emotional.

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  17. Pat TillettApril 30, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    very nice and very gentle...

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  18. Anupama K. MazumderMay 12, 2011 at 10:52 PM

    Simple words, but such perfect portrayal of emotions. Nice!

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