Thursday, April 7, 2011

Change

Oh… It’s getting darker again.
Not only today,
It started long ago. He said.

I reached,
I studied the trend.
It will continue.

Don’t sell your bold kit,
It will help you somewhere.
I tried it for long.

Where are you now?
Far better than before.
Ain’t it?

Go little more,
Soon you will reach.
I am sure.

Look around you.
Whose hand is empty?
Who has no reasons?

We have a big bag full!
A steep, a break and a slope,
Accept this truth.

Reasons to cry.
We forget the reasons to smile.
We cried, not smiled.

Yes; it may be difficult.
But you must try.
Learn to change.

This is for you,
It’s for me too,
For others if they wish.
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15 comments:

  1. RajeshApril 7, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    Simply wonderful.

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  2. RHYTHM AND RHYMEApril 7, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    Wonderful indeed,

    Thanks for the visit and comment much appreciated.

    Yvonne,

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  3. anthonynorthApril 7, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    Yes, I agree. Excellently done.

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  4. Brian MillerApril 7, 2011 at 4:25 PM

    nice. inviting others into compassion...a gentle message

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  5. GailApril 7, 2011 at 7:38 PM

    Hi
    very nice post - :-) I look forward to us getting to know one another.
    Love Gail
    peace.....

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  6. Betsy Banks AdamsApril 7, 2011 at 9:45 PM

    Very very nice... Change is hard for all of us... We like routine. We don't like things to change --yet most of the time, change is VERY good for all of us...
    Betsy

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  7. MagyarApril 8, 2011 at 12:26 AM

    __To use three of your lines, Pranavam... your fine thought.

    "accept this truth
    _we cried not smiled
    _learn to change"

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  8. TaborApril 8, 2011 at 3:26 AM

    Always the hardest and bringing fear is change because we do not really know what it will bring.

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  9. LVApril 8, 2011 at 3:47 AM

    It is very hard to change when you get my age. I do try to be flexible and live every day to the fullest. You are a very wise young man. Always pleased when you visit. I have another young man that is a very talented writer from your country. I cannot remember how to spell his name, but will let you know next time. I doubt you know him.

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  10. MarleneApril 8, 2011 at 5:01 AM

    I like "Look around you. Whose hand is empty? Who has no reasons?" Nice.

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  11. deepsApril 8, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    another nice one from you...
    one with a simple and stern piece of advice... :)

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  12. girl daydreamingApril 8, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Wonderful writing and a very important message.

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  13. AnneApril 8, 2011 at 6:30 PM

    Thank you for stopping by my blog. I enjoyed this poem. There is always time for change, no matter how old you are. This was a great reminder.

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  14. CarlettaApril 9, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Change isn't easy but the world would be a better place if we all could change just a little. :)

    Carletta's Captures

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  15. Janice ThomsonApril 11, 2011 at 6:32 AM

    "We forget the reasons to smile."
    So much said in just that one little line Pranavam - enough to keep one in deep thought for many days...
    Well done - I very much enjoyed this piece.

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