Friday, June 10, 2011

Rain

Came from above,
A silver drop,
That wet the ground,
Dim hours pervade.

A rhyme and sip,
A perfect blend to pass,
This drizzly blues,
Thought, a man in the court.

A point to walk,
Holding her hands,
Soon he drifts,
This is by a loving soul.

Who is pouring from the top?
Gazed the little boy,
He started sailing,
Paper boats one at a time.

After long days,
The time to relax,
Thought our little sun,
Went ahead for a day sleep.

Who wrenched my nest?
Voiced the little dove,
She is fairly busy,
To carry her twigs away.

The falling drops,
Roving soul,
A darling walk,
Gazing thought,
A sleeping cause,
Quite busy pack...

Let it shower evermore!!!

26 comments:

  1. Its after a long time, a month or so I was away for medical emergencies. I appreciate all for your visit and suggessions.


    Cheers!

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  2. Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and for your lovely comment.
    I appreciate for your beautiful poem. Excellent.

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  3. this was most refreshing as our weather here has been very hot and not one silver drop of rain for weeks!

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  4. glad you are back...love a good storm...today it is storming, which is great considering it has been over 100 degrees the last 2-3 days...

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  5. Lovely imagery created here.

    Like Brian said, good storm needed here too...it's way too hot!

    Nice one!

    Thanks for sharing and visiting my blog.

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  6. Sorry to hear you've had medical emergencies. I hope all is well again now.

    Lovely poem. I like this very much. I can see and feel the rain and how it affects each one. Nice images.

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  7. yes, let it shower on...
    u seem to have again taken a break

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  8. Sorry to hear of your health issues, but glad you are doing better and back in the blog world. I always enjoy your visits and poems. You have an excellent way with words.

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  9. I have seen your comment and I have been delighted by that.Thank you very much.
    I can understand Malayalam but not able to read.
    I have seen good poems in your site.
    Jazakallah Khayran
    JazakAllah Khayr (Arabic: جزاك اللهُ خيراً‎) is an islamic term and Islamic expression of gratitude meaning "May Allâh reward you [in] goodness. ...

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  10. Very nice words; deep feelings and lovely thoughts.
    Thank you for your visit to April, Food for thoughts. I had for a while a blog pause. Now I am back.
    How are you, I hope you are well.

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  11. Hope you are better...so many beautiful stories weaved with magic strings of rain. lovely.

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  12. Beautiful! I wondered where you'd been.

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  13. Love the refreshing rain!
    We need some here very badly!
    So enjoyed your poem!

    Take care & be well.

    Margie :)

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  14. u're poem is as pure and fresh as rain..! loved it

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  15. Love the rain...we had a bit TOO much of it this spring though!

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  16. nice. i love a good rain...and you capture some of the fun of it....have not done paperboats in years...

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  17. Your poem was beautiful.
    Would you like to participate in Friday Flash Fiction 55?
    if yes...E-Mail me at
    galenhay@gmail.com

    Thanks for visiting...Galen

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  18. How sweet :) It's beautiful !
    Thanks for dropping by! Do come again :)

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  19. Hi
    Thank you for visiting my blog. you write very nice poems!
    the rain is nice, but it's been raining here for a while, so I can't wait to feel and see the sun again.
    Have a very nice day!
    Lydia

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  20. Jingle appreciates your support to our poetry potluck.
    Our week 41 Theme is: Saints, Monks, and Meditations,
    Yet, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome… ;)
    Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!
    Looking forward to seeing U on Sunday, 8pm or later.
    Stay Blessed,
    Love and hugs.
    xoxox

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

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