Friday, March 18, 2011

Words

Words Outspoken,
Thoughts shattered,
Undivided, undecided.

Not meant to point,
Not sure too,
It’s unexpected.

My eyes began to drip,
Thoughts changed,
So with my path.

Sure…! You may be right,
I could be wrong,
But not always.

13 comments:

  1. An interesting take on arguments. Words can be scattered this way.

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  2. i like this, it only matters when people care... arguing happens... finding the words to make up are worth it.

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  3. The way you have abstracted it is so nice!

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  4. nobody is right always...
    to err is human as they say...

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  5. Truth here, Pranavam, in your words.

    "words outspoken
    ...not meant to point
    my eyes begin to drip
    ...sure you may be right"

    I thank you for your visit! _m

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  6. I agree with Magyar! Thanks for visiting, and leaving a comment on my post. You should join us for next week's Saturday Centus!

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  7. everyone is right sometimes, smiles. and words can be such a prickly thing....

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  8. Words once spoken cannot be recalled - and there's the sadness of it.

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  9. wow! you know what I like about your writing? few words used but they mean so much. Keep it up.

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