Friday, December 14, 2012

The july night


You counted the truth,
a simple walk, from the start
in His path, so determined
nigh on to the tops.
Thanks to the november,
which gifted the star,
a crack of a new dawn,
a great fortune indeed,
that is more in need,
in our merry shell.
His love, His mercy,
the lovely crystals,
you always deem more
- to the rubies or corals.
You too travelled the dark,
where no lovely meadows,
only shadows that mobs,
sans refuse, so certain.
Yet the July night,
carried the shine,
to rest in a flash.
What my sorry can do for thee?

22 comments:

  1. Dedication to H H Maharaja Chithira Tirunal Bala Rama Varma, (The last ruler of Erstwhile Travancore Kingdom) on his birth centenary year!!


    If you are more interested about His Highness Click here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chithira_Thirunal_Balarama_Varma

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  2. Nice to see you posting on your blog again, Kochuravi. Thank you for stopping by my blog to say hello. I'm not familiar with the Maharaja you wrote about here, but I enjoyed the poem you wrote honoring his centenary year. Interesting history. Have a good weekend!

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  3. Thanks for your visit to my blog! Interesting that someone in India can write such nice poetry in English. Many in this country could not do as well! I also am a great fan of Mother Theresa. Glad to meet you....

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  4. thanks for popping in today....very nicely done...i like how you take them into the dark but play that against the light as well...

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  5. You are a very talented person. Take it and use it wisely. Nice seeing you all the way from India.

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  6. What a lovely poem. Thanks for visiting and the lovely comment. Bless you dear!

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  7. Beautiful poem! Thank you for commenting on my blog. I'll place your link on my blog list.
    Have a nice day.

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  8. Great use of colour to illuminate the feelings..a real sense of journeying and perseverance..jae

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  9. Lovely composition pranav! Enjoyed reading it.

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  10. Lovely!
    You've been gone from blogging awhile. Welcome back.
    Thanks for your visit today!

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  11. thank you for visiting my blog today and leaving a comment. appreciate it very much!

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  12. nice post...

    and thanks for visiting my blog

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  13. the shine of July night glittering all the way to December...

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  14. I'm a little late here, but I too want to thank you so much for visiting my blog.Your poem is beautiful.

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  15. Wishing you a merry Christmas and many blessings for the new year!

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  16. Wish you a very happy Christmas & peaceful and prosperous New Year

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  17. thanks for the warm holiday wishes....i hope you are well...smiles.

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  18. An interesting read :)

    Wishing u a very happy new year Pranavam

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  19. Hi Kochu Ravi,
    Good to meet you today at one of my friends' page.
    Nice to note that you have a wonderful page. Well versed poem.
    Keep it up.
    Here, I would like to invite you to join us
    at the A to Z April Blog Challenge.
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    Waiting to hear from you and to joine at a to z
    Have wonderful time of blogging

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    PS:
    Ravi Please remove the word verification from here. It gives trouble to your followers and commenting persons. Thanks Phil

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